Indelible (The Twixt #1)
by Dawn Metcalf
I’m really glad I stuck with this book. I almost put it down about 9% in since it wasn’t making sense and I was getting frustrated. But I stuck with it and got to read a much better final three quarters. I liked Joy, she was realistic, and later, an asset in bad situations. Her teen problems in the book were probably not geared towards me, but they came across genuine and fleshed her out as a person. The other main character was Ink, who was crafted by pseudo-Fae to be a scribe for their markings, along with his sister Inq. I can see how YA can be a hard genre to write, since the character(s) are technically underage. Throw in a significantly older person or being and you’ve got the starting of an unhealthy relationship. But this was done really well and I had no qualms about Ink and Joy being together. Ink had been dedicated solely to his job his whole existence, so much that he had no weaknesses. It wasn’t until he was “seen” by Joy and subsequently marked her (as a type of assistant) that he became close to anyone… he had to learn to be human and was thus innocent. He hadn’t even formed real ears or fingernails. I loved the dark turning of the book, the “Fae” type beings were really awesome and not your standard pretty shells. The mystery that started unfolding about half way was ingenious and climaxed well.
My Lunatic Life (Lunatic Life #1)
by Sharon Sala
Sharon Sala is a smooth author and there was little to worry about her foray into YA fiction, the story was solid and I was pleasantly surprised to be left hanging on an unsolved point rather than reading a rush conclusion. I like the main character and I like her ghosts, although I would have liked to know more of their background. The love interest, Flynn, came across somewhat pale because I couldn’t get a good fix on him. He didn’t feel as fleshed out despite having more “screen time” than some of the other characters. Perhaps there was a formatting error in the Kindle version I got, but there were several instances of point-of-view change where someone else was suddenly narrating. It was obvious that it was a different person, but the editing there was odd since it looked no different than the preceding paragraph. Overall this was a light, pleasant read by a veteran author. Good job Ms. Sala, I’ll be reading the next! (I need to know what happens!)
Lunatic Detective (Lunatic Life #2)
I enjoyed this book but it seems a bit out of order. The first few chapters hashed the prior book’s events and backgrounds, then a big chunk was the conclusion of DeeDee’s mystery since Tara found a way to find her body. At the end of the story it was more of the strange presence and filler. It seemed out of pace and weird. I expected a better conclusion and more cohesion throughout. Sharon Sala is such a seasoned writer, I didn’t expect that from her. I like the strong characters she writes in this YA series, even if the pop-culture references are utterly mainstream.
Semester Aboard (More than Magic #1)
by Elizabeth Kirke
I started out divided on this, since there was lots of physical descriptions of the people in the book, but not much plot was set up. Further along, you get interested in the characters and their histories. We’ve got a big cast of friends: Jen (new witch), Danio (water elemental), Char (fire elemental), Mariana (mermaid), TS (werewolf), Thomas (vampire) all posing as (or living as) humans on a cruise ship that counts as a Summer semester of college as it goes up and down the west coast of the Americas. Unfortunately the story was too divided amongst the trip excursions and the multi-character byplay rather than any true depth or the mystery of the vampire(s) on board, who are feeding off passengers. The vampires were just there, and they were bad. There were also too many devices allowing implausible things; such as the worldwide Magic Security place (run shoddy if they don’t get back up in there). But it did hold my interest and I liked the characters.
Snow Bound (More than Magic #2)
I stopped this at 54% and won’t be finishing. It’s just getting too silly. This whole soul-packmate BS is super trite and annoying. The story starts off with Jen arriving to a ski resort to meet up with the others. She hasn’t learned anything (not even new spells, cause I am heartily tired of ‘night vision’ and ‘warming’ being the extent of her prowess). Characters like Mariana are left by the wayside again, with no use than being the token mermaid. Then this whole drama with TS and Thomas had me balking, then wanting to snap my Kindle. After Jen’s (annoying, argumentative) cousin Shannon is thrown in the mix… it was quite the book killer. I’m sure this may be up the alley for a (much) younger reader who is interested in the characters.
by Scarlett Dawn
I enjoyed this book for the shiny, glowy ride that it was. It was rather light on much plot holding it together, there was no seeking out clues of the mystery for the characters. But it was very dynamic, the “special effects” are told in the writing style. I thought it was written a bit juvenile at first, but it ends up fairly wordy with lots of descriptions. By the end of the book I had ignored the varying formatting styles and the occasional punctuation oops.
The main character is Lily, who was born of a Shifter Mom and a Vampire Dad – but hybrids are not supposed to happen or left alive. She was raised by a Mage and her Mom, and eventually makes her was to King Hall for Mysticals (Mages, Vampires, Elementals, and Shifters). She is mated with Dominic, another Shifter (she lives her life as a Shifter and can change into a wolf) but when he is killed by Commoners/humans, his position as the next King of Shifters passes to her. She makes the best of friends with Ezra the Vampire, Jack the Elemental, and Pearl the Mage. Meanwhile we’ve got wisecracking, crafty Kings training the new “prodigies.”
The story is really all over the place, it jumps months at a time at the convenience of the author. And there is no one theme holding the antagonizing events together. It’s just flashy, quippy people you enjoy reading about.